tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5759055.post7629477107996372553..comments2024-01-21T11:10:06.779-06:00Comments on Michael Allyn Wells: Magpie Tales 89 / Poem: The Gritty FactsMichael A. Wellshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06015233939646285069noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5759055.post-76668861016369013772011-11-02T20:07:13.652-05:002011-11-02T20:07:13.652-05:00Thanks All! Doc I'll have to think about that...Thanks All! Doc I'll have to think about that.Michael A. Wellshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06015233939646285069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5759055.post-91047986855849956622011-11-01T14:59:25.021-05:002011-11-01T14:59:25.021-05:00Good stuff! Terse. No wasted words. Except - could...Good stuff! Terse. No wasted words. Except - could you perhaps dispense with the phrase in parenthesis? I think most readers would still take your meaning.Doctor FTSEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10052101566471519778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5759055.post-4550120418551295072011-11-01T11:42:16.332-05:002011-11-01T11:42:16.332-05:00Beautiful. I do love the delete key...Beautiful. I do love the delete key...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5759055.post-52215023641737277892011-10-31T18:12:55.524-05:002011-10-31T18:12:55.524-05:00Poetic sounds. Wonderful!Poetic sounds. Wonderful!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5759055.post-22124164908691992242011-10-31T15:47:16.159-05:002011-10-31T15:47:16.159-05:00that sound had its own poetry...true that...nice l...that sound had its own poetry...true that...nice look back in this.....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5759055.post-36513181845218729022011-10-30T18:34:40.741-05:002011-10-30T18:34:40.741-05:00As soon as you mentioned the sound, I began to hea...As soon as you mentioned the sound, I began to hear it in counterpoint to your poem, that victory of hitting returns. Sweet pair of double-(or more)-meaning hanging endings. Am realizing as I type how effortlessly I am deleting. Your Magpie does seep under one's skin.Kathy B.https://www.blogger.com/profile/09475101089455608729noreply@blogger.com