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Thursday, September 29, 2005

These Last Days

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Air like iceberg lettuce
Morning sun shyly holds back
Lower in the sky

Windshields are Post-it notes
For tiny fingers

Listen-
You can hear ballparks deflating
And birds packing for long trips

2 comments:

  1. Accurate aim at the mood of summer/fall time. I'm liking your style. Very much. I'll be back.

    Now that blogger has comment verification, I hope you'll consider opening up comment to us (numerous) bloggers from other cities than "blogspot.com" Like me for example. I'm using another blog name to post, but my REAL fake, blog namd is Garnet or Glittermuse of GlitteringMuse

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  2. I love the idea of birds packing. I have no problem imagining them doing that.

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