There is a history of going
and coming—
of pleasing and displeasing—
of knocking on wood
and crossing fingers
and Late Night
with and without David
Letterman.
There are vague memories
of Here’s Johnny and
nights turned away
and nights…
nights so hot we could not
stand to touch and
others so hot the sweat
was the conductor of electricity
the completed circuit
that rode between two bodies
too wrapped up in each
to hear the pitter patter
of little feet
that
may
or may not
have been outside
the door.
The walls know more
than the disarray can tell.
But walls are the great depositories
of secrets. They hold
on to things we never knew
and things too
we let go of.
©2010 – Michael A. Wells - All Rights Reserved
Magpie Tales 37
This is a nice one. I like "The walls know more than the disarray can tell."
ReplyDeleteI like it that the walls hold all. I like all your stories and memories in this piece.
ReplyDeletethis really speaks to me...and I'm sure I'm not alone.
ReplyDeleteSo, walls have memories, as well as ears? Nice!
ReplyDeleteW&P - if walls could talk :)
ReplyDeleteMarilyn and Jinksy- Thanks!
Rene/NTR - of course that is what every poet I think wants to know happens. Thanks!
Loved, loved this!!!
ReplyDeletegreat write- good thing walls cannot speak.
ReplyDeleteI really liked this and enjoyed the story told and all the periphery stories imagined and implied. Wonderful :-)
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Can't wait till walls do talk! This poem reaches very deeply for me..thank you...
ReplyDeletewalls know more...
ReplyDeletevery imaginative tale.
thanks for the beautiful ride.
Jingle, Susannah, Kathew and Helen... Thanks!
ReplyDeleteLyn... deeply is good. Thank you!
nice. i like th lingering of the memories...even of those we let go...sometimes they are good to turn over again....
ReplyDeleteyou had me with the first line - this read fast and intense..very nice
ReplyDeleteThanks Brian!
ReplyDeleteClaudia that's good to hear. First lines are the hook. Without good ones, the rest often goes unread. Thanks!
Thanks Brian!
ReplyDeleteClaudia that's good to hear. First lines are the hook. Without good ones, the rest often goes unread. Thanks!
Thanks Brian!
ReplyDeleteClaudia that's good to hear. First lines are the hook. Without good ones, the rest often goes unread. Thanks!
Love your first stanza and the reference to Letterman, really grounded it in the here and now. I like poems that do this.
ReplyDeletevery emotional.. I too feel the same way about a Wall- here's how I did that with it- http://oliviasmindlymatters.wordpress.com/2010/04/24/678/
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Happy Weekend
there is alot more to this then meets the eye...the years of memories here ...here comes johnny to letterman...love hot and cold...words,worlds and secrets...nice write...bkm
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