Dog by scavangercat808
My Parallel Universe
another world out there
framed in my view—
a world of ruckus
fast moving cars
I can chase
only in my imagination
a postman strolls unflinched
oblivious to my bark
children chasing balls
will pass and give a nod
hey you they
offer
no hand to pat my head
there are noises
I can’t even identify
people cats birds
smells the permeate
my universe
I know these things exist
charmingly sad.
ReplyDeletea sad commentary on how some dogs exist instead of living. Well done.
ReplyDeleteLove how he chases in his imagination...
ReplyDeletei liked the fact your piece was from the dogs view....excellent...x
ReplyDeleteMakes me sad. So much undeserved fear of these dogs.
ReplyDelete...beyond his reach...
ReplyDeleteSongs of a Melancholy Mutt. :-)
ReplyDeleteSad....
ReplyDeletedoggy tales
Wow.... obviously I succeeded in creating a downer.
ReplyDeleteFirst poem I've read which comments on the dogs thoughts so eloquently.
ReplyDeleteSo sad yet so lovely.
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Poor dog. Someone needs to take him for a walk!
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