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Saturday, January 22, 2011

Magpie Tales 49 - POEM: A Day Out





A Day Out

A trio of women
blades slung over shoulders,
slug their way to the pond,
their trails in the banks
of quiet white mark
their pilgrimage-

No socks to mend
no laundry, no meals
to be accounted for-
their voices clamoring
escape         they will
upon arrival  -  in
their most unlady-like fashion
cut loose on their secret mirror
under a cloudy sky;
skating, frolicking and acting
like the daughters
they would chastise
for such behavior
on any other day.




2011 © Michael A. Wells




8 comments:

The Blog of Bee said...

There's a young girl in all of we older women!

Well said!

Reflections said...

Oh but for just a few moments of gliding like angels, flying on air, wondrous joyful (unladylike) behavior... But who would miss a moment like this!

Mary said...

Well done Michael. I can sense the escapism (from the domestic chores!)and the frivolity of the girls in your lovely poem. Beautifully captured.

Helen said...

Oh...so true! A clever interpretation for sure.

Tess Kincaid said...

I love to imagine their escape.

* said...

A brilliant poem, my favorite part being, "cut loose on their secret mirror
under a cloudy sky." Well done Magpie!

M. Reka said...

Lovely write, very well done Michael. love it :)
Short Poems

~T~ said...

A thrilling escape!