[two writes this week]
One Bite
on the kitchen table
red, freckled
and blemished;
awaiting a suitor
who could appreciate
my inner beauty—
and you came,
took one bite
and left.
First Bite
A violent sound
a chunk of an iceberg
splitting off the core
and falling away—
a starburst of juice
cascades over and about
the gums; roll to the tongue
exploding in flavor.
This is no ordinary apple;
one in season,
ripe with intensity
to awaken.
© 2010 Michael A. Wells
Magpie Tales 30
10 comments:
Shame, shame on the suitor in One Bite ... he/she should have looked deeper.
I really liked the intensity and strength of First Bite! No ordinary apple ~ for sure.
Love that sound of the iceberg splitting. I'm so craving a crisp apple right now!
These are terrific!
One Bite - so typical of a throw away society... lol :)
I really lie 'One Bite' for its pithyness. And its simple truth. The other i like for its sounds and tastes. I'm with willow. I need to crack an iceberg from an apple.
Nice writing! I loved these.
Susannah :-)
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One Bite is my favorite. Such a cruel world!
I like both bites! But first bite compels me to go get an apple right now! Nice Magpies
I scoffed both! Typical me! Fine Magpies.
i love how the sound took me by surprise! excellent mag!
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