The Other Woman
I stare into the mirror
at the dressing table.
Another woman looks
back—
a young woman
amazingly foreign
to the ordinary geography
of my world;
black dress, string of pearls,
she draws her inner wriststo her face, fair in the silver tone
background—
gently the essence of rose
regal and voluminous
laced in lilac and vanilla
rises as she fills her chest.
How different
from the aroma
of tomato sauce
crowed out by basil,
garlic and pepperoni
amid the musty smell
of dishes from the morning
mingling in the sink with those
the night before—
2010© Michael A. Wells - all rights reserved
14 comments:
Michael, this is beautiful. I imagine you watching your mother getting ready for a night out...
Rene
Very nice writing! Beautiful take on the Magpie showing two sides of a classic elegant woman.
well done....I love the comparisons
nice. i am glad she can still see that girl in the mirror...it probably helps her appreciate the other...nice magpie!
Yes, it is time 2 b done with being a housewife, it is time 2 b that other person... sexy & passionate, it is time 2 b the other her.
Nicely handled contrasts.
heart throbbing imagery. wonderful!
I want to know where she's going, with whom, what will happen tonight.
I find it interesting how many of these mags include a dressing table and mirror. It's an elegant piece of the past that many of us remember.
Thanks for this poem!
Very nice poem. I enjoyed reading it.
Beautiful poem with such vivid imagery....a well written magpie!
:-)
Beautiful comparisons and imagery. Draws the reader to the moment, each of them.
Great writing.
Dishes in the sink are guaranteed to bring one down to Earth with a bump!
I love the places mirrors can take us. Beautiful piece, Michael.
Well written, enjoyable.
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