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Friday, September 24, 2010

Magpie Tales 33






The Other Woman

I stare into the mirror
at the dressing table.
Another woman looks
back—

a young woman
amazingly foreign
to the ordinary geography
of my world;

black dress, string of pearls,
she draws her inner wrists
to her face, fair in the silver tone
background—

gently the essence of rose
regal and voluminous
laced in lilac and vanilla
rises as she fills her chest.

How different
from the aroma
of tomato sauce
crowed out by basil,
garlic and pepperoni
amid the musty smell
of dishes from the morning
mingling in the sink with those
the night before—



2010© Michael A. Wells - all rights reserved



14 comments:

Unknown said...

Michael, this is beautiful. I imagine you watching your mother getting ready for a night out...

Rene

Kristen Haskell said...

Very nice writing! Beautiful take on the Magpie showing two sides of a classic elegant woman.

Kathe W. said...

well done....I love the comparisons

Brian Miller said...

nice. i am glad she can still see that girl in the mirror...it probably helps her appreciate the other...nice magpie!

kathi harris said...

Yes, it is time 2 b done with being a housewife, it is time 2 b that other person... sexy & passionate, it is time 2 b the other her.

Doctor FTSE said...

Nicely handled contrasts.

Priyanka Bhowmick said...

heart throbbing imagery. wonderful!

violet said...

I want to know where she's going, with whom, what will happen tonight.

I find it interesting how many of these mags include a dressing table and mirror. It's an elegant piece of the past that many of us remember.

Thanks for this poem!

Anonymous said...

Very nice poem. I enjoyed reading it.

Carrie Van Horn said...

Beautiful poem with such vivid imagery....a well written magpie!
:-)

Reflections said...

Beautiful comparisons and imagery. Draws the reader to the moment, each of them.

Great writing.

Jinksy said...

Dishes in the sink are guaranteed to bring one down to Earth with a bump!

Tess Kincaid said...

I love the places mirrors can take us. Beautiful piece, Michael.

Berowne said...

Well written, enjoyable.