Dog by scavangercat808
My Parallel Universe
another world out there
framed in my view—
a world of ruckus
fast moving cars
I can chase
only in my imagination
a postman strolls unflinched
oblivious to my bark
children chasing balls
will pass and give a nod
hey you they
offer
no hand to pat my head
there are noises
I can’t even identify
people cats birds
smells the permeate
my universe
I know these things exist
12 comments:
charmingly sad.
a sad commentary on how some dogs exist instead of living. Well done.
Love how he chases in his imagination...
i liked the fact your piece was from the dogs view....excellent...x
Makes me sad. So much undeserved fear of these dogs.
...beyond his reach...
Songs of a Melancholy Mutt. :-)
Sad....
doggy tales
Wow.... obviously I succeeded in creating a downer.
First poem I've read which comments on the dogs thoughts so eloquently.
So sad yet so lovely.
Anna :o]
Poor dog. Someone needs to take him for a walk!
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