Sunday, December 30, 2007
7 Things You Should Know About Writing Poetry:
Deborah Ager posted a list of 7 things you should know about writing poetry. She challenged others to make their own list. I saw Kelli's list & below you will find mine.
7 Things You Should Know About Writing Poetry:
- Writing poetry can be solitary even amongst other people.
- There will be days you question what you are doing and swear you’ll never write again. This will pass. Often later the same day.
- People will think you are moody because you are a poet. This is not so. Even people who cannot write a single line of poetry can be moody anytime prior to their death.
- You will add years to your life if you can learn to resist trying to explain the meaning of your poetry when people ask.
- It is not mandatory that you be narcissistic to be a poet, but on the other hand it won’t hurt.
- Not everything we write has happened to us. If so, we would all be a little too weird.
- It’s not that our parent(s) didn’t teach us to share; we just tend to get fussy about our writing instruments, journals, and the table at Starbucks we sit at, etc.
Saturday, December 29, 2007
Fools Gold?

Thursday, December 27, 2007
A Few Thoughts this Thursday Night
The assassination of Benazir Bhutto is heavy on my mind. I suppose in part, because I always find political assassination to be particularly distasteful. It is so contrary to the order of society and political discourse. Another reason I think it hits home with me is that I have been thinking a lot lately about the role of arts in society the past few days and how democratic nations where free speech is tolerated is a place where arts should by all rights flourish and those nations that are controlled by a strong government of censorship and repression of ideas should be free of such artistic expression.
I look at China and Burma for example and am amazed at the courage it takes to be an artist outside the control of the government in these places. Still, we see evidence of courageous individuals who risk much under harsh conditions. Then I think how in our own country so many of us sit back and watch quietly as so many elements of our freedom are challenged from within.
The Pakistani people are truly at a critical juncture and it seems obvious there is a very fine line between the existence of a presumed democratic state and a military controlled one and just how tenuous democracy has become there.
It’s funny that political discourse and artistic expression can both provoke strong reactions from people. So here I am tonight, not listening to any music that I can share with you, but instead considering just how much alike the arts and political discourse are. How both need a positive nurturing environment to remain healthy.
The people of Pakistan tonight must surely recognize how delicate the order to their society is.
The rest of us wait, and watch to see how it responds to the challenges it is presented with. What kind of order and society will survive.
Meanwhile, I think about poetry, music, and other fine arts and realize they aren’t just art, but expressions and reflections of who we are. We need to stop treating them as “just” arts, like in the educational process they are less than. Less than science or math or history. They are after all, who we are as a people. When art is restricted, our expressions are muffled. When that happens, freedom and democracy are on the line.
Political assassinations not only kill people, but the expression of ideas. Suppression of the arts
will kill them too.
Looking into the future...
Tuesday, December 25, 2007
Monday, December 24, 2007
Latest 12 month Update
Submissions sent last 12 months: 46
Submissions sent this month: 8
Acceptance ratio: 15.38 %
Sunday, December 23, 2007
Saturday, December 22, 2007

This morning from my bedroom I heard rain beating against the windows. Considering the temperature I knew this was not a good thing. Tonight the ball field across the street looks larger then life in massive white.
In the picture above, my bud Barry, maintains a stern view of things.
Started reading Pushkin's Eugene Onegin which my daughter brought home with her from school for the Christmas break. Considering her distaste of poetry I am intrigued that she enjoyed the book so much.
Haven't shared any journal bits for a few days so I'll throw some in this post...
- portions of the night are tattered/comfort estranged/rest could only be a figment of active imagination
- I looked at my left hand/traced the lines deep/into the country side/until I could not recall /how I got there
- strung together, we are popcorn/and cranberries- differences/flashing red lights do not exclude
- night is lax on standards/makes no effort to screen/leaving the door ajar
- there is one non sequitur/that echoes in your head/and loosens the bindings/of Webster's unabridged/joins the others as the new word for the year/the binding restitched all tidy
Friday, December 21, 2007
With the good comes a dilemma
My success rate with getting material published has been the best ever this year. I think in part due to more aggressive submission efforts than past. Still, I do feel that I have managed some outstanding pieces of work over the year and this is a result for growth in my work.
I've placed a greater emphasis upon revision of my poems and keep them back longer in many instances then in the past. The dilemma I am facing is the feeling that the method I have relied upon for workshoping work is broken. There is not sufficient consistency available among my existing sources to be able to simply be satisfied with how this is working.
I have met in the past with another group at a local library for this purpose but there were only a couple of us writing poetry and the rest were fiction writers. It was not a good match and I discontinued my participation.
Our local poetry chapter has at times been a source of input, but we do not meet solely for the purpose of workshoping and while it proves helpful at times, it is not a situation where there are other who regularly use it for this purpose and as such I do not want abuse the meeting time.
There are others with whom I have in the past exchanged work by email for the purpose of workshoping and that has worked well at times, but more recently it seems again, a one way street. It is not a good thing when I am more regularly working on stuff and others have little or nothing to send. I am a firm believer that everyone needs to feel the benefit of such a process. Lately, (and perhaps it is due to the holiday season) everyone else seems to be at a standstill. At any rate, as I look ahead to the new year, I must figure out how to deal with this challenging issue.
Thursday, December 20, 2007
Quote for the Day
"Art is only a means to life, to the life more abundant. It is not in itself the life more abundant. It merely points the way, something which is overlooked not only by the public, but very often by the artist himself. In becoming an end it defeats itself." ~ Henry Miller
Monday, December 17, 2007
Inevitable (draft)
The prodigal son is just one of many
though he knows expectations run high.
There is always this red velvet carpet
that divides his thought process.
The future is some worm baited taunt,
and awkward as being caught with a cousin
at the Perkins family reunion.
It takes the swim of salmon upstream
to break a biblical cycle
that darkens the sky and
chokes off free will.
Times like these you swear
You’re an orphan.
Dan Fogelberg 1951-2007
Dan Fogleberg, singer and songwriter whose hits "Leader of the Band" and "Same Old Lang Syne" helped define the soft-rock era of the late 1970's died Sunday at his home in Maine after battling prostate cancer. He was 56.
Christine Klocek-Lim announces Autumn Sky Poetry 8 is on line. I haven't read it yet, but I intend to today. Christine's selections are worthy reads.
My youngest daughter came home for the holidays. It's so refreshing to hear her laughter in the house.
Went to Boarders yesterday looking for a certain book and came up empty. Sometimes I think I should own a bookstore so that there was on which stocked a broad inventory of poetry material and not just a token section. Of course I'd likely go broke doing it. Wait a minute! I am broke.
Wow - Sandra Beasley has a poem on Slate : The World War Speaks
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Sunday, December 16, 2007
Diane Middlebrook - Poet & biographer dies of cancer
Friday, December 14, 2007
Thursday, December 13, 2007
Wednesday, December 12, 2007
Journal smatterings
- perception grows elongated/hangs around crowds/making the kinds of impressions/teenagers do to one another/looking to make points/with the opposite sex
- Intonation offered up for what?/ears- or simply a regurgitation
- nights of elastic boredom/ripple with salty waves/of complacency we suck on/there is a satisfying feeling /like a dog gets licking your face
- you showered the long day away/I gave you a bath robe/the belt hung limp
Gamers will 'w00t' over word of the year - Internet- msnbc.com
Tuesday, December 11, 2007
Duende & the Bag We Drag Around
They go on to correlate this to what the poet Robert Bly refers to as the shadow. Our shadow is presumably a long beg we drag behind us throughout life. As we learn what others / society doesn’t like, we start “bag stuffing” or discarding into the bag what we do not wish others to see. By the time we are adults there is just this thin slice of us visible and the rest we’ve stashed in the bag we drag around.
Addonizio and Laux have pieced this altogether with Lorca’s duende (see yesterday’s post) and it is certainly easy to see where this other part of us comes from. Without committing anything to a page, one can see how our lives alone reflect this conflict. If we can dip into this bag as we write, our writing can reveal a part of us that offers a genuine picture of humanity that we do not normally identify with, yet, is very real.
I know from personal experience how hard it is to get away from self censorship. If we subconsciously withhold a grater part of ourselves in day to day life, how easy can it be to peel back the cover and let light expose that which we work so hard to deny.
My challenge is to go to that bag when I write and try my best to reach into it like I were drawing a letter while playing scrabble and just accept what comes out to incorporate it into my poetry.
Monday, December 10, 2007
Finding duende
I've spoken here in the past about how so often the really striking poetry rises out of conflict. This is something Donald Hall has written about in essay. In Edward Hirsch's the demon and the angel - Searching for the Source of Artistic Inspiration he talks about the emergence of the duende philosophy I believe first introduced by the Spanish poet Federico Garcia Lorca in a 1930 lecture. There are a variety of other poets and philosophers who speak of this same mysterious force deep within human nature. I am finding the shared view of numerous poets on this subject to be a significant part of my learning curve as it relates to poetics.
In both my own writing and in the works of other poets that I especially enjoy reading, I like to see and feel dissonance. That contrasting conflict that arises when we write from inspiration on one hand, and allow ourselves the uncensored deep rooted mysterious part of our self to come out and play in our work. It is when these two forces - internal and external are present that I believe the best writing often occurs.
Enough on this subject tonight... but I will take it up again tomorrow.
Sunday, December 09, 2007
A Little Poetry News to Chew On
In Janet's World the poetry is contemporary issues and extremely accessible - though not likely to win any awards. [ story ]
Tiny chapbooks that combine art, literature and design [ story ]
The story of on of Philip Larkin's (1922-85) greatest narrative poems, "The Explosion"which offers thoughts on the process of poetry.
Saturday, December 08, 2007
Poetry's PR chick in New Zealand

Friday, December 07, 2007
If you are looking for a real treat this Friday...
Thursday, December 06, 2007
A poet & his companion...

It's cold here tonight. Snow came to the Kansas City area today. Driving home tonight was treacherous.
To the left you see my little tuckered out buddy that was banished to the room with the poet at work for tormenting one of the cats. Sort of like sending him to Siberia I guess.
He's a good boy most of the time... but he has his weak moments. But don't we all?
Worked on some rewrites tonight and also sent off three poems in search of homes. I feel compelled to find these orphans homes for the holiday.
Wednesday, December 05, 2007
Poets and Evolution of Language
Since poetry is generally regarded as the best words in the best order, such focus on word economy greater exposes each word to scrutiny, thus providing greater focus upon meaning. Individual words stand out far more in poetry than say fiction or essay or any other written communication endeavor.
It is amazing to me how the centenaries of language evolution must have progressed as man sought to find common quotients in expression. The transference from cryptic drawings to word sounds and the vastness of vocabulary expansion seems to me nothing short of phenomenal. There can be no mistaking this was an evolutionary process and it seems to me somewhat odd to think that even today this evolution is still in process right under our noses.
Is not the very articulation of metaphorical usage pushing the envelope of language? It seems to me the answer is yes, and in that context poets have a significant role to play in moving and shaking the language of our culture. The question I have, is which side of the curve are poets more often on? Are we ahead of the curve pulling language, or are we behind the curve pushing the cultural change of language as the read them in society today?
Monday, December 03, 2007
The past twelve months....
- Pending responses: 11
- Submissions sent last 12 months: 40
- Submissions sent this month: 2
- Acceptance ratio: 15.79 %
Affirmation: I will do more over the next 12 months!
Monday Rat Race Starts
Quote for today....
Sunday, December 02, 2007
Poetry in the News - Sunday Night
Friday, November 30, 2007
Dinner with Kim
Addonizio is a talented writer that has carved out successes in both poetry and fiction but admittedly prefers poetry. So you see, she already has me like putty in her hands; but honestly there is something about the edginess in her writing that is real. As she reads you seem to lose yourself in the words and find at the end you’ve awaken in your bed in cold sweats with the whole scenario next to you.
The crowd in the theater last night was attentive hanging to her words. There is no doubt in my mind that others too found themselves lost in her poetry. It is rich, it is real and if we were counting calories it is over the top.
She finished all this off… the poetry, a few pages from her latest novel, with a sign that her talents do not end with a pen. She treated us to a song on her harmonica. It was as song! It had distinguishable notes- not that wha-wha- whaa- wha you traditionally think of with a harmonica.
You won’t get the music if you buy the book, but her poetry is still very much worth the read. There are a few individual poems of hers out there on the Internet to discover, but her poetry is worth having in your library. And if you ever get lucky enough to hear her live, don’t pass it up!
Some audio of Kim:
What Do Women Want?
Salmon
Lush Life
Thursday, November 29, 2007
Life before my father’s murder - Times Online
"Life before my father’s murder Any hope of life to come is removed; this place is born of the loss of her father and her mother's betrayal" -Frieda Hughes commentary
Wednesday, November 28, 2007
Kim Addonizio Interview
The local newspaper has an interview with Kim By John Mark Eberhart of The Kansas City Star:
'If Kim Addonizio ever experiences artistic fear, she doesn’t wear it on her sleeve.
She’s not intimidated by form; she has written fiction, nonfiction and poetry. She’s not intimidated by subject matter; she has confronted sex, violence, mortality. She’s not even afraid to face that big heartbreaker of a subject — love.
Addonizio’s books include the verse collections Tell Me and What Is This Thing Called Love? as well as her novel from earlier this year, My Dreams Out in the Street. The author, who lives in Oakland, Calif., will read from her works Thursday night at Rockhurst University; see accompanying box for details. Recently she answered a few questions about her writing.' - John Mark Eberhart
Interview
Tuesday, November 27, 2007
The Osmond Flop in freestyle
Monday, November 26, 2007
The difference between...
Sunday, November 25, 2007
Who is art for?
Friday, November 23, 2007
A pitiful bird
It's crazy.... As I sit here at 7:15 AM there are actually people all over this crazy city that got up and went to malls and stores that were opening (some as early as 4 AM) early with special deals. Those poor souls in some cases had to get there and stand in lines that formed like 2 hours before opening. So like about 5 hours ago. Crazy Crazy People. Amazon lets you be crazy shopping like a fool from your home for Black Friday deals on all kinds of things.
On the actual subject of poetry, I did manage some rewriting yesterday. With success, I might add. Still, at one point I felt a bit of writers burn out coming on. I don't know what triggered it. It happens from time to time. I think mostly it seems to be associated with some overwhelming anxiety - not necessarily even related to writing. At any rate, it appears past for the moment.
Read a fun piece from Poetry Foundation dot org titled 1,1,2,3,5,8, Fun - What's a Fib? Math plus poetry. Their basis is the Faonacci sequence. The number of syllables in each line of the poem is the sum of the previous two lines: 1,1,2,3,5,8. It becomes a six line twenty syllable poem. I though I'd play around with it a bit and seewhat I can create. It's not at all new, some of you may have already been writing them.
Wow... here is a surprise! The Amazon Kindle is out of stock already! They only went on sale Monday.
Wednesday, November 21, 2007
Tuesday, November 20, 2007
Galatea Resurrects - Eighth Issue
GALATEA RESURRECTS (A POETRY ENGAGEMENT) is pleased to release its Eighth Issue with 64 new reviews/engagements!We are always looking for reviewers; next review deadline is March 5, 2008. For GR's submission and review copy information, please go to http://grarchives.blogspot.com
Missouri Opus
Glenn North & Pellom McDaniels Tonight
Former Chiefs player Pellom McDaniels pictured leftGlenn North career as a spoken word artist began in 1997 when he founded Verbal Attack, a monthly open mic poetry event. Glenn is the Director of the Urban Transcendence Poetry Project where his duties included facilitating poetry writing and performance workshops for youth in Wyandotte County as well as the adjudicated youth in Jackson County detention centers.
Currently Glenn is the Poet-in-Residence of the American Jazz Museum where he organizes and hosts the popular open mic poetry competition, Jazz Poetry Jams. He is also working toward the completion of his first volume of poetry entitled, Fortunate Ad-Verse-ity.
Known by many as a former defensive lineman for the Kansas City Chiefs, Pellom McDaniels has moved beyond his athletic career to that of an accomplished academic and community activist. He has authored his own book, My Own Harlem, established the "Arts for Smarts" foundation, and currently serves as professor of American Studies at University of Missouri-Kansas City.
Monday, November 19, 2007
e-publishing?
I was interested to see several news items crop up on e-book readers. I had thought these items were like dead on arrival. Apparently some think not. Amazon is unveiling the new Kindle e-book reader Today in New York and Sony launched an upgraded version of its Sony Reader lat month. And The Wall Street Journal quoted an executive's estimated that e-book sales range between $15 million and $25 million annually. Still, in an industry that generated $25 billion in revenues last year that seems to me pretty small. I personally have downloaded e-books rarely, and I'm not sure that having a portable reader would change that much. I realize they do have some positive points including the environmental friendly nature but is there really that much potential for e-publishing?
Thursday, November 15, 2007
At the Same Time
"Art enables us to find ourselves and lose ourselves at the same time." ~ Thomas Merton
I am but a lost and found box
in which I am constantly
reappearing like the stray cat at your door.
Even I fail at times
the test of recognizing
the sad clown of suppressed laughter
or the Angry tiger barb in a bowl
with no other fish to dine on.
Who are these characters I ask...
and in the smoke that clears
is the pretext for lust of three car garages,
swimming pools, a wife and 2.3 children
by the proletariat.
Anger wrapped in swaddling clothes
and a Molotov cocktail in my hip pocket-
Jesus am I adequately confused yet?
You can see my self portrait
in black velvet paintings
for sale in a Love and Peace van
at the 66 station on 8th and Hamilton.
Wednesday, November 14, 2007
At the botton of a fishing hole - on a chain and cender block
Then, later I put a poem in its second draft out of misery. I may steal a line from it for something else, but otherwise it is in the bottom of some Missouri fishing hole.
Tuesday, November 13, 2007
Quote of the Day
Gratitude
At any event, I felt an overwhelming desire to make note of a few things that I feel a true gratitude for. Some are small things, some are much more significant and as such the order of their mention here has nothing to do with the level of significance from one to another.
- an occasional glass of Chardonnay
- a good nights rest
- the clasp of my wife's hand when walking together
- the Fire Red Oaks in our back yard in fall
- a bite of dark chocolate
- a call or text message from the kids during the day
- my wife's voice on the phone in the middle of a busy day
- white - sweet bread
- a book of poetry within reach
- Clairton - D when needed
- a taste of honey
- the smell of Brazilian Nut Butter
- NPR radio
- every single day of the baseball season
- a/c in the car
- a fountain pen
- paper to write on
- a furry four legged friend
- hair on my head
